You could try experimenting with warmer lighting colors, see how you like it. Not telling you how to do your game of course, just I personally am a little off-put by the difference in color between animated scene and dialogue scene.
I love the story, I hate ntr if it's from the perspective of the cuck, this kind of perspective is good, it took me so long to find something like this, I support you dev
Okay, so it seems that I had made an oversight for the Android version.
Not realizing Android didn't allow users to directly patch files.
However, I've now provided a workaround for Android users.
Re-download the ExclusiveEdition Patch, extract the "BlackRose-ExclusiveEdition-Patch.zip", and read the newly created "ANDROID Users-InstallGuide.txt" document.
It will essentially guide you to a Pre-Patched Android APK, allowing you to play the Exclusive Edition that you've paid for on your android device.
I apologize for the inconvenience that this must have caused you, Wakidoodle.
I don't intend to play this, or at least not right now anyway, but I did want to share a scenario, just for fun -- While the Player has their own thing going on, the wife and husband with reproductive issues get together and fall in love as well, which the families agree with, because they might as well salvage SOMETHING from the original marriage. So while the Player is doing their own thing, they can also watch the discarded husband and wife have their own slice-of-life moments together.
Just thought that would be adorable.
Anyway, good luck! Again, not sure if I'll play it, but I hope your project takes off!
Unfortunately, I believe that the majority of players prefer that girls only have sexual intercourse with players. Since their bodies are no longer part of the player's character, it's better not to see each other again. I wish girls a happy time when they are with others
To me, it doesn't make a difference. Destroying someone's love doesn't make people feel excited, it only makes them feel like they have become animals who prioritize sexual behavior over emotions, denying their pursuit of love
Sorry to hear you are discontinuing this game but i will say i loved playing it and wished you could finish it but i either way thank you for all that you have done. I wish you the best and ever if you feel lime you are able to finish this then do it don't let outside forces block your passion my friend
you're a god for having the option to pay from itch. my region does not allow patreon payment, so i have not been successful in trying to get games available there. thank you.
So...what's in the exclusive edition? It talks about skipping the intermission and nothing much else. And based on that, it sounds like it had less content than the public version (which, I don't think is the case but no other info is available in the page so...).
EDIT: Just got to the intermission. I do agree that skipping that could be a nice-to-have though not necessarily to spend money over unless you just want to support the dev (which I think what you're aiming for. Anyway, I just might buy the game once it has more content but it's going pretty well at the current state.
So I played the first chapter, and I must say it felt really... off? Spoilers I guess, but I didn't like how everything just goes immediately into "please impregnate my wife". The characters have known each other for years, but there wasn't enough time for the player to get to know them before the dinner scene. I guess I just expected more dialogue and events before that.
Secondly, Jona later brings up something like "well that's what they did back in the old days", but how come subjects like surrogates and sperm donation weren't brought up at all? I am 100% for Netori, but if you're going for a serious thriller where you're talking about heavy stuff like the inability to have children, I feel like more realistic things like that should've been brought up.
If the game had a light, fun, and sexy atmosphere like a lot of other adult novels, I wouldn't care. But in the type of game I think you're going for? I'm not sure how to put it into words, but I would really consider "how would this happen in most real-life situations?" and "how do I want this to happen?", and weave together those two things moving forward; makes everything more believable and easy to swallow that way.
I'm not trying to tell you how to make your game, just wanted to give you some honest feedback.
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Aside from the lighting in some animated scenes making the girls' skin so pale that it's straight up #FFFFFF, this game is great so far.
Thanks! 😁
And yeah, that seems to be a habit of mine.
You could try experimenting with warmer lighting colors, see how you like it. Not telling you how to do your game of course, just I personally am a little off-put by the difference in color between animated scene and dialogue scene.
Excellent writing. You got mad skills. Really felt the tensions
Thank you.
It's great to know that you really liked my writing style.
As I put a lot of effort into it.
I love the story, I hate ntr if it's from the perspective of the cuck, this kind of perspective is good, it took me so long to find something like this, I support you dev
I know what you mean Arnio.
Which is what inspired me to make Black Rose.
And thank you for supporting me Arnio. 👍
Are fucking kidding me dude I buy the fucking think and can't even play because it's not for android!
Okay, so it seems that I had made an oversight for the Android version.
Not realizing Android didn't allow users to directly patch files.
However, I've now provided a workaround for Android users.
Re-download the ExclusiveEdition Patch, extract the "BlackRose-ExclusiveEdition-Patch.zip", and read the newly created "ANDROID Users-InstallGuide.txt" document.
It will essentially guide you to a Pre-Patched Android APK, allowing you to play the Exclusive Edition that you've paid for on your android device.
I apologize for the inconvenience that this must have caused you, Wakidoodle.
Hopefully you will give my game another chance.
If there's any more problems, please let me know.
So I can find the solution for you Wakidoodle.
Spanish?
I'm afraid not yet.
When the game starts getting language options, I'll be sure to try add Spanish.
I don't intend to play this, or at least not right now anyway, but I did want to share a scenario, just for fun -- While the Player has their own thing going on, the wife and husband with reproductive issues get together and fall in love as well, which the families agree with, because they might as well salvage SOMETHING from the original marriage. So while the Player is doing their own thing, they can also watch the discarded husband and wife have their own slice-of-life moments together.
Just thought that would be adorable.
Anyway, good luck! Again, not sure if I'll play it, but I hope your project takes off!
Umm...that's not gonna happen.
As this isn't THAT kind of game.
Thank you for your kind words of encouragement for me, I do appreciate it.
As a somewhat old fan, I'm glad to hear you got better.
Thank you, it means a lot to hear that. ❤️
Unfortunately, I believe that the majority of players prefer that girls only have sexual intercourse with players. Since their bodies are no longer part of the player's character, it's better not to see each other again. I wish girls a happy time when they are with others
I think you've misunderstood what this game is about.
This is a Netori game, where the protagonist is the one doing the 'stealing' of someone else's significant other.
Not to be confused with Netorare, where you are stolen from.
Hope that clears everything up, thank you.
To me, it doesn't make a difference. Destroying someone's love doesn't make people feel excited, it only makes them feel like they have become animals who prioritize sexual behavior over emotions, denying their pursuit of love
Well understandably not everyone will like it.
That said, the game's story does address the topic of selfishness involved & destroying someone else's love.
If someone doesn't want to play as the 'stealer'.
That is their choice, and I'll respect that.
But this is for those who've wanted a Netori AVN.
Do creators have plans to create NTR free works in the future?
Black Rose is already "NTR Free" (No NTR).
But if you were also counting Netori as "NTR"...
I'll just say I do have ideas for other projects where Netori won't be the focus, but it would likely have optional Netori paths.
e.g. A Love Interest that is already married to someone else.
Again I have to reiterate, Netori is not considered to be NTR.
Omg no way😧😧😧😧😧 niceeeeeee this is awesome. I really liked this one I'm so happy is got an update 😍
Awesome!
I'm glad to see an old fan excited again.
Hope you'll enjoy this update.
I'm sorry but the game looks amazing it's just that the thought of someone else having sex with my partner even without romance is pretty fucked
I know this comment is old, but I have to clarify something.
In this game, YOU are the one doing the 'stealing'.
Hence 'Netori' instead of Netorare (complete opposites).
Sorry to hear you are discontinuing this game but i will say i loved playing it and wished you could finish it but i either way thank you for all that you have done. I wish you the best and ever if you feel lime you are able to finish this then do it don't let outside forces block your passion my friend
Just wanted to come back here and say thank you for your supportive comment.
It meant a lot to me, whilst I dealt with my IRL problem.
Hope you'll like the newest update BloodAngelCapt.
oorah
you're a god for having the option to pay from itch. my region does not allow patreon payment, so i have not been successful in trying to get games available there. thank you.
I knew some would prefer to pay through itch, but I didn't realize Patreon doesn't allow payments for some regions.
Either way, I'm glad itch worked out for you.
Thank you for your support Odentoga.
yeah, it's how it is here in my region, heavily censoring any foreign subscription based stuffs!
anyway thanks again for having it here in itch! great game by the way, cant wait for the next update!
The mc's genitalia seem too small in contrast to the physique of the women.
Especially for a netori game.
So...what's in the exclusive edition? It talks about skipping the intermission and nothing much else. And based on that, it sounds like it had less content than the public version (which, I don't think is the case but no other info is available in the page so...).
EDIT: Just got to the intermission. I do agree that skipping that could be a nice-to-have though not necessarily to spend money over unless you just want to support the dev (which I think what you're aiming for. Anyway, I just might buy the game once it has more content but it's going pretty well at the current state.
It's an additional patch that turns the Public Version into the Patreon Version pretty much (I was going to call it the Patreon Edition beforehand).
And it's for those who want to support the game, but would prefer to pay from itch.
For now, yes.
It pretty much skips the intermission periods, and continues on with the story without any interruptions.
I intend to expand upon the Exclusive Edition, with extra content in the future (where I'll likely then raise the price).
And thank you, MentalMan.
Have a good one.
is there insect
Insect?
I assume you're referring to incest?
So I played the first chapter, and I must say it felt really... off? Spoilers I guess, but I didn't like how everything just goes immediately into "please impregnate my wife". The characters have known each other for years, but there wasn't enough time for the player to get to know them before the dinner scene. I guess I just expected more dialogue and events before that.
Secondly, Jona later brings up something like "well that's what they did back in the old days", but how come subjects like surrogates and sperm donation weren't brought up at all? I am 100% for Netori, but if you're going for a serious thriller where you're talking about heavy stuff like the inability to have children, I feel like more realistic things like that should've been brought up.
If the game had a light, fun, and sexy atmosphere like a lot of other adult novels, I wouldn't care. But in the type of game I think you're going for? I'm not sure how to put it into words, but I would really consider "how would this happen in most real-life situations?" and "how do I want this to happen?", and weave together those two things moving forward; makes everything more believable and easy to swallow that way.
I'm not trying to tell you how to make your game, just wanted to give you some honest feedback.
These are fair criticisms.
Especially the surrogate point.
Which someone had also brought up on the Discord server.
There's a cannon reason for why they didn't go for that approach, however I didn't show this in the game.
I might change this in a future update, if I can.
But yes, I understand your points.
And I'll keep them in mind.
Thank you for playing my game, and giving your thoughts on it.
When will the next version be released?
Apologies for my late response nastrox.
I plan to post a dev-log soon, talking about the future of this project.
Not even a fan of Pregnancy but I'm always down for some Netori.
Glad to have you on board Baxlo 🤝
This is male mc right? Also, are you adding it for andriod?
Yes, and I have plans for an android port listed as the first goal for my Patreon page.
yay, more netori.
The more netori, the better I always say 😏
Hope you've enjoyed it.