So I played the first chapter, and I must say it felt really... off? Spoilers I guess, but I didn't like how everything just goes immediately into "please impregnate my wife". The characters have known each other for years, but there wasn't enough time for the player to get to know them before the dinner scene. I guess I just expected more dialogue and events before that.
Secondly, Jona later brings up something like "well that's what they did back in the old days", but how come subjects like surrogates and sperm donation weren't brought up at all? I am 100% for Netori, but if you're going for a serious thriller where you're talking about heavy stuff like the inability to have children, I feel like more realistic things like that should've been brought up.
If the game had a light, fun, and sexy atmosphere like a lot of other adult novels, I wouldn't care. But in the type of game I think you're going for? I'm not sure how to put it into words, but I would really consider "how would this happen in most real-life situations?" and "how do I want this to happen?", and weave together those two things moving forward; makes everything more believable and easy to swallow that way.
I'm not trying to tell you how to make your game, just wanted to give you some honest feedback.
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Insect?
I assume you're referring to incest?
So I played the first chapter, and I must say it felt really... off? Spoilers I guess, but I didn't like how everything just goes immediately into "please impregnate my wife". The characters have known each other for years, but there wasn't enough time for the player to get to know them before the dinner scene. I guess I just expected more dialogue and events before that.
Secondly, Jona later brings up something like "well that's what they did back in the old days", but how come subjects like surrogates and sperm donation weren't brought up at all? I am 100% for Netori, but if you're going for a serious thriller where you're talking about heavy stuff like the inability to have children, I feel like more realistic things like that should've been brought up.
If the game had a light, fun, and sexy atmosphere like a lot of other adult novels, I wouldn't care. But in the type of game I think you're going for? I'm not sure how to put it into words, but I would really consider "how would this happen in most real-life situations?" and "how do I want this to happen?", and weave together those two things moving forward; makes everything more believable and easy to swallow that way.
I'm not trying to tell you how to make your game, just wanted to give you some honest feedback.
These are fair criticisms.
Especially the surrogate point.
Which someone had also brought up on the Discord server.
There's a cannon reason for why they didn't go for that approach, however I didn't show this in the game.
I might change this in a future update, if I can.
But yes, I understand your points.
And I'll keep them in mind.
Thank you for playing my game, and giving your thoughts on it.
When will the next version be released?
Apologies for my late response nastrox.
I plan to post a dev-log soon, talking about the future of this project.
Not even a fan of Pregnancy but I'm always down for some Netori.
Glad to have you on board Baxlo 🤝
This is male mc right? Also, are you adding it for andriod?
Yes, and I have plans for an android port listed as the first goal for my Patreon page.
yay, more netori.
The more netori, the better I always say 😏
Hope you've enjoyed it.